This should've won the contest
That was pretty cool. It had a feel-good tone in the end AND it was genuinely funny. Bravo. 9/10
I cannot wait for Sonic 4!
This reminds me of...
...something you would see on an MTV commercial. Very professionally done, good job!
Although it may not look like it, because of your artstyle and music, the ending seems to be an optimistic one to me.
It's realy how you look at it , is a new world created from the old one a fertile garden, or a graveyard? but it is true what your saying, when i tried this with a different song in the beginning it had an entirely different feel to it, alot happyer.... but i must say i enjoy the darker atmosphere more ^^
I am so confused and aroused at the same time.
Lets start off with the important points
Graphics - 4/10 Your art wasn't very good, and seemed too basic
Animation - 8/10 You possess good mastery of animating in flash.
Sound - N/A Your animation would be much better with some kind of sound involved
Story - N/A
Originality - 7/10 Giant transforming robots.
By practicing your art skills, it is possible that you can make a first rate AAA flash. The animating itself is quite good, but the bad art brings it down. The lack of any sound is disappointing, and you would surely have gotten higher scores with it. However, keep up the good work and you will surely be known by the Newgrounds viewers everywhere.
One thumb up
I liked the animation as a whole, but the humor was very slow overall. What I liked about it was when Robotnik took the pornographic magazine and... well... splurted at sonic. But still, there are so many freakin cock jokes these days!
Graphics - N/A Sprites
Sound - 6/10 PINGAS!
Originality - 4/10
Humor - 7/10
Overall - 7/10
Keep at it, you're doing a good job! But please, no more cock jokes!
thanks for the review! I am getting better at making flashes, but I still can't draw well using it. that's why I only used sprites. The exception is robotnik's cock, but i didn't even draw that, i took it from google images.
The humor was kinda slow, so i felt bored throughout most of the flash. The voice acting isn't good enough for a flash that doesn't rely on animation. I do like how you are trying to take cock jokes to a somewhat different level, but cock jokes are still cock jokes and they just aren't that funny anymore.
However, when I did catch the humor, I laughed at it. You just need to work on your delivery, and maybe make more complex drawings. 6/10 for a decent enough effort without the use of animating.
Thanks, glad you laughed! However, I'll have you know that you were looking at drawings that were about THREE MONTHS in the making! To do what you're asking - to make MORE COMPLEX drawings...why, that may very well be an impossible feat. :P
Good, for a begginer!
Apart from being very slow in the beggining and some terrible animation, its the second half that made me keep watching this. Just like ellebirdy23 said, that bullet ricochet screen actually made me laugh a little. I also liked the cameo appearances from many other characters (I think I saw the guy from texas chainsaw massacre in there somewhere)
Did you make that helicopter scene a few weeks after you made the first half of the movie? It was pretty well animated for a beginner.
As a first flash I rate this 6/10 Due to the first half and second half of this movie being different.
Hehe yeah, I made the first 3 scenes of the movie some weeks before making the last one, you can see that because the animating skills are different in ''Escape'' than in the other 3 scenes, yeah that's because the helicopter is better animated, I think I will remake the first 3 scenes so the animation is better. Thank you
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.